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Chapter 10 - The Midnight Drive to the Lowcountry

The black Lincoln Navigator cut through the steady mountain mist on Interstate 77 South, its high-beam headlights slicing through the dark pine forests of South Carolina like twin surgical blades.

Inside the cabin, the atmosphere was thick with silence.

Grace sat in the front passenger seat, staring out the window at the blurred shapes of highway signs flashing past in the dark, her fingers tracing the edge of the manila folder resting on her lap.

In the back seat, Marcus sat with a heavy canvas duffel bag between his boots—a bag containing encrypted communication gear, digital forensic tools, and enough legal leverage to make a municipal police department in the Lowcountry reconsider its entire retirement plan.

I kept my hands at ten and two on the leather steering wheel, my mind replaying every detail of the Charleston docks file Grace had uncovered.

Peter Parker had been an honest accountant in a dishonest world.

When my father’s old business associates—headed by Vanessa’s father—began using Whitfield Logistics subsidiary accounts to funnel illegal cartel-protection money through the port of Charleston, Peter had refused to sign the transfer vouchers.

He had tried to blow the whistle by mailing a certified copy of the ledgers to a federal investigator in Columbia.

He never made it to the post office.

His car was run off the winding coastal road outside of Mount Pleasant, and his body was dragged down to the municipal docks to make it look like a drunken accident.

And the local police captain who signed the closure report?

Captain Robert Thorne.

A man who had retired three years ago with a full municipal pension and a luxury beachfront home in Sullivan’s Island, paid for in cash.

“We’re not going to the precinct,” I said, breaking the silence as we crossed the state line into South Carolina.

Grace turned her head slowly from the window.

“Where are we going?”

“We’re going to Captain Thorne’s house,” I replied, my eyes fixed on the illuminated highway ahead. “If we go through official channels, his old buddies on the force will tip him off before we even clear the county line. We’re going to pay him a personal, midnight visit.”

Grace’s lips parted slightly, but she didn’t argue.

She simply nodded once, her expression hardening into the same cold resolve that had carried her through two years of domestic servitude in a house designed to break her spirit.

By 3:30 AM, the interstate had given way to the narrow, oak-lined back roads of the Lowcountry, draped in heavy Spanish moss that hung from the ancient branches like tattered curtains in the moonlight.

The air smelled of salt water, damp earth, and decaying marsh grass.

Marcus directed me down a private, shell-paved drive off a secluded coastal peninsula in Sullivan’s Island.

At the end of the drive sat a sprawling, two-story coastal home surrounded by manicured lawns and dark, silent water.

A single porch light burned above the front door.

I cut the Lincoln’s headlights half a mile back, coasting the heavy SUV into the deep shadows of a cluster of palmetto trees beside the property line.

We killed the engine.

The quiet of the marshland rushed in to fill the cabin—the distant croak of bullfrogs, the gentle lapping of the tide against the wooden bulkhead, and the steady, heavy ticking of the SUV’s cooling engine.

“Marcus,” I whispered, keeping my eyes on the glowing porch light of the house. “Take the side perimeter. Make sure his vehicle in the garage isn't keyed for a quick exit.”

“On it, boss,” Marcus murmured, slipping silently out of the back door like a shadow swallowed by the night.

I turned to Grace, who was unbuckling her seatbelt.

“You stay in the car,” I instructed quietly.

Grace reached for the door handle, pushing it open with a soft click.

“No, Daniel,” she said, her voice leaving no room for argument as her boots hit the damp gravel drive. “Six years ago, I waited in a car while my husband went down to those docks. I’m not waiting in a car tonight.”

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I looked at her for a long moment, then nodded.

We stepped out together, the cool salt air hitting our faces, and walked side-by-side up the shell path toward the front door of retired Captain Robert Thorne.

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